Okay. I want to post a story on this roleplay I did. The roleplay was just kind of a randomized plot for my story... but now I'm sue if I should post itttt. Here's the plot (basically).
Mistfall Murder Camp. Basically, everyone here are campers, but they all have a death wish. XD. Ghosts, ghouls, and soulless shells live here. But one day, this one special person ignites a spark in the posterchild of the "Murder" part of the camp, Ash. Ash is crazy, a sadist, and unpredictable. The only person she doesn't want to kill is Jacie, the camp counselor, who just so happened to sell her soul to the camp. This story reveals the true intentions, backstories, and hidden dreams of the characters in a world of metaphors, murders, and mania. But the question is, will Ash's "spark" ignite a howling fire or a fiery passion? (Here's 2 samples: "Her unnerving smile sent chills up my spine, hard enough to shatter my confidence like glass." and "'Oh, Elain, you cannot make the choice of mortality or immortality when you are still trying to decide whether to live or to die.'")
Okay, pleasepleaseplease let me know if it sounds good?? Also, put your comments/suggestions in the comment section?
Constructive criticism is not only accepted, but encouraged.
Why so serious? I'm going to post this story on my Quotev account.
Mistfall Murder Camp. Basically, everyone here are campers, but they all have a death wish. XD. Ghosts, ghouls, and soulless shells live here. But one day, this one special person ignites a spark in the posterchild of the "Murder" part of the camp, Ash. Ash is crazy, a sadist, and unpredictable. The only person she doesn't want to kill is Jacie, the camp counselor, who just so happened to sell her soul to the camp. This story reveals the true intentions, backstories, and hidden dreams of the characters in a world of metaphors, murders, and mania. But the question is, will Ash's "spark" ignite a howling fire or a fiery passion? (Here's 2 samples: "Her unnerving smile sent chills up my spine, hard enough to shatter my confidence like glass." and "'Oh, Elain, you cannot make the choice of mortality or immortality when you are still trying to decide whether to live or to die.'")
Okay, pleasepleaseplease let me know if it sounds good?? Also, put your comments/suggestions in the comment section?
Constructive criticism is not only accepted, but encouraged.Why so serious? I'm going to post this story on my Quotev account.
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